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Date: Sun, 19 Feb 2023 20:15:26 +0100 (CET)
From: Gerald Pfeifer
To: gcc-patches@gcc.gnu.org
cc: NightStrike
Subject: [pushed] wwwdocs: *: Add a comma after "In addition" when used as
transition
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As promised yesterday, this not only improves the one case that
triggered NightStrike's note, but all cases I found in wwwdocs.
Pushed.
Gerald
---
wwwdocs: *: Add a comma after "In addition" when used as transition
On the way reduce one use and simplify a sentence.
---
htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 4 ++--
htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html | 2 +-
htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html | 2 +-
htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html | 2 +-
htdocs/git.html | 4 ++--
htdocs/spam.html | 3 +--
6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
index fd4062e6..c47d3285 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
- OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The
close
map
modifier and the affinity
clause are now supported.
- In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
+ In addition, Fortran gained the following features which were
available in C and C++ before: declare variant
is now
available, depobj
, mutexinoutset
and
iterator
can now also be used with the depend
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
align
and allocator
modifiers to the
allocate
clause and the atomic
extensions are
now available. The OMP_PLACE
environment variable supports
- the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition the OMP_NUM_TEAMS
and
+ the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition, the OMP_NUM_TEAMS
and
OMP_TEAMS_THREAD_LIMIT
environment variables and their
associated API routines are now supported as well as the memory-allocation
routines added for Fortran and extended for C/C++ in OpenMP 5.1. In
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
index d98f9b71..6143db0c 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
This page provides a summary of discussions about the pros and cons
of distributing libgcc
as a shared library, as well as a
-static library. In addition this page details the plans regarding
+static library. In addition, it details the plans regarding
libgcc
for the GCC 3.0 release.
Issues
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
index 201a039f..6952f866 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ are not listed here).
and built-in support. It is enabled through option -mmwaitx
.
The instructions monitorx
and mwaitx
implement the same functionality as the old monitor
- and mwait
instructions. In addition mwaitx
+ and mwait
instructions. In addition, mwaitx
adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third
argument and stored in register %ebx
.
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
index b400dd9c..0c7d2582 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ within strings:
and built-in support. It is enabled through option -mmwaitx
.
The instructions monitorx
and mwaitx
implement the same functionality as the old monitor
- and mwait
instructions. In addition mwaitx
+ and mwait
instructions. In addition, mwaitx
adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third
argument and stored in register %ebx
.
diff --git a/htdocs/git.html b/htdocs/git.html
index f71b451f..2543c237 100644
--- a/htdocs/git.html
+++ b/htdocs/git.html
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@
large. That way you can pick up any version (including releases) of
GCC that is in our repository.
-In addition you
-can browse our
+In addition, you can
+browse our
Git history online.
(Our web pages are managed via Git in a
diff --git a/htdocs/spam.html b/htdocs/spam.html
index 349e70c7..43040100 100644
--- a/htdocs/spam.html
+++ b/htdocs/spam.html
@@ -45,8 +45,7 @@ avoid creating unnecessary traffic:
harvested.
-In addition may want to check out
-www.abuse.net.
+Also check out www.abuse.net.