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[2620:52:3:1:0:246e:9693:128c]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id ew4-20020a170907950400b008cb24fbfaa9si4011336ejc.682.2023.02.20.02.32.36 for (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Mon, 20 Feb 2023 02:32:36 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of gcc-patches-bounces+ouuuleilei=gmail.com@gcc.gnu.org designates 2620:52:3:1:0:246e:9693:128c as permitted sender) client-ip=2620:52:3:1:0:246e:9693:128c; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of gcc-patches-bounces+ouuuleilei=gmail.com@gcc.gnu.org designates 2620:52:3:1:0:246e:9693:128c as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom="gcc-patches-bounces+ouuuleilei=gmail.com@gcc.gnu.org" Received: from server2.sourceware.org (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by sourceware.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 17D683835E38 for ; Mon, 20 Feb 2023 10:19:42 +0000 (GMT) X-Original-To: gcc-patches@gcc.gnu.org Delivered-To: gcc-patches@gcc.gnu.org Received: from hamza.pair.com (hamza.pair.com [209.68.5.143]) by sourceware.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 16A863858C00 for ; Mon, 20 Feb 2023 10:19:16 +0000 (GMT) DMARC-Filter: OpenDMARC Filter v1.4.2 sourceware.org 16A863858C00 Authentication-Results: sourceware.org; dmarc=none (p=none dis=none) header.from=pfeifer.com Authentication-Results: sourceware.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=pfeifer.com Received: from hamza.pair.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by hamza.pair.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4921D33E50; Sun, 19 Feb 2023 14:15:28 -0500 (EST) Received: from naga.localdomain (188-23-63-229.adsl.highway.telekom.at [188.23.63.229]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by hamza.pair.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id B8AAA33E4F; Sun, 19 Feb 2023 14:15:27 -0500 (EST) Date: Sun, 19 Feb 2023 20:15:26 +0100 (CET) From: Gerald Pfeifer To: gcc-patches@gcc.gnu.org cc: NightStrike Subject: [pushed] wwwdocs: *: Add a comma after "In addition" when used as transition MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Scanned-By: mailmunge 3.10 on 209.68.5.143 Message-Id: <20230219191528.4921D33E50@hamza.pair.com> X-Spam-Status: No, score=-9.5 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00, GIT_PATCH_0, KAM_DMARC_STATUS, KAM_SHORT, RCVD_IN_BARRACUDACENTRAL, SPF_HELO_NONE, SPF_PASS, TXREP autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on server2.sourceware.org X-BeenThere: gcc-patches@gcc.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Gcc-patches mailing list List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: gcc-patches-bounces+ouuuleilei=gmail.com@gcc.gnu.org Sender: "Gcc-patches" X-getmail-retrieved-from-mailbox: =?utf-8?q?INBOX?= X-GMAIL-THRID: =?utf-8?q?1758345724161664525?= X-GMAIL-MSGID: =?utf-8?q?1758345724161664525?= As promised yesterday, this not only improves the one case that triggered NightStrike's note, but all cases I found in wwwdocs. Pushed. Gerald --- wwwdocs: *: Add a comma after "In addition" when used as transition On the way reduce one use and simplify a sentence. --- htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 4 ++-- htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html | 2 +- htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html | 2 +- htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html | 2 +- htdocs/git.html | 4 ++-- htdocs/spam.html | 3 +-- 6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html index fd4062e6..c47d3285 100644 --- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html +++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
  • OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The close map modifier and the affinity clause are now supported. - In addition Fortran gained the following features which were + In addition, Fortran gained the following features which were available in C and C++ before: declare variant is now available, depobj, mutexinoutset and iterator can now also be used with the depend @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ You may also want to check out our align and allocator modifiers to the allocate clause and the atomic extensions are now available. The OMP_PLACE environment variable supports - the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition the OMP_NUM_TEAMS and + the OpenMP 5.1 features. In addition, the OMP_NUM_TEAMS and OMP_TEAMS_THREAD_LIMIT environment variables and their associated API routines are now supported as well as the memory-allocation routines added for Fortran and extended for C/C++ in OpenMP 5.1. In diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html index d98f9b71..6143db0c 100644 --- a/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html +++ b/htdocs/gcc-3.0/libgcc.html @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@

    This page provides a summary of discussions about the pros and cons of distributing libgcc as a shared library, as well as a -static library. In addition this page details the plans regarding +static library. In addition, it details the plans regarding libgcc for the GCC 3.0 release.

    Issues

    diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html index 201a039f..6952f866 100644 --- a/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html +++ b/htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html @@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ are not listed here).

    and built-in support. It is enabled through option -mmwaitx. The instructions monitorx and mwaitx implement the same functionality as the old monitor - and mwait instructions. In addition mwaitx + and mwait instructions. In addition, mwaitx adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third argument and stored in register %ebx.
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html index b400dd9c..0c7d2582 100644 --- a/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html +++ b/htdocs/gcc-6/changes.html @@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ within strings: and built-in support. It is enabled through option -mmwaitx. The instructions monitorx and mwaitx implement the same functionality as the old monitor - and mwait instructions. In addition mwaitx + and mwait instructions. In addition, mwaitx adds a configurable timer. The timer value is received as third argument and stored in register %ebx. diff --git a/htdocs/git.html b/htdocs/git.html index f71b451f..2543c237 100644 --- a/htdocs/git.html +++ b/htdocs/git.html @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ large. That way you can pick up any version (including releases) of GCC that is in our repository.

-

In addition you -can browse our +

In addition, you can +browse our Git history online.

(Our web pages are managed via Git in a diff --git a/htdocs/spam.html b/htdocs/spam.html index 349e70c7..43040100 100644 --- a/htdocs/spam.html +++ b/htdocs/spam.html @@ -45,8 +45,7 @@ avoid creating unnecessary traffic:

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+

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