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Bagas Sanjaya
Oct. 23, 2022, 1:08 p.m. UTC
Hi everyone, sorry for quickly resending this patch series due to duplicated patch [7/7] sent as result of amending the corresponding commit. The proses written in KUnit documentation are IMO incomprehensible (my brain has to process what the meaning of words used) and different from wordings that I normally read from technical writings. Thus, rewrite these using clearer words. Anyway, it's great to see native English speakers help reviewing this series. The first two patches are v3 of rewriting "Writing Your First Test" section of "Getting Started" patch [1], which was submitted about a month ago. The rest are actual documentation rewriting. Note that this series only rewrites intro, test writing and running docs. [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/20220929132549.56452-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com/ Bagas Sanjaya (7): Documentation: kunit: rewrite "Writing Your First Test" section Documentation: kunit: align instruction code blocks Documentation: kunit: rewrite the rest of "Getting Started" documentation Documentation: kunit: move introduction to its own document Documentation: kunit: rewrite "Running tests with kunit_tool" Documentation: kunit: rewrite "Run Tests without kunit_tool" Documentation: kunit: rewrite "Writing tests" Documentation/admin-guide/README.rst | 2 + Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/index.rst | 93 +---- Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/intro.rst | 61 ++++ Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_manual.rst | 68 ++-- Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/run_wrapper.rst | 302 ++++++---------- Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/start.rst | 264 +++++++------- Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/usage.rst | 322 ++++++++++-------- 7 files changed, 483 insertions(+), 629 deletions(-) create mode 100644 Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/intro.rst base-commit: de3ee3f63400a23954e7c1ad1cb8c20f29ab6fe3
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On Sun, Oct 23, 2022 at 08:08:40PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > Hi everyone, sorry for quickly resending this patch series due to > duplicated patch [7/7] sent as result of amending the corresponding > commit. > > The proses written in KUnit documentation are IMO incomprehensible (my > brain has to process what the meaning of words used) and different from > wordings that I normally read from technical writings. Thus, rewrite these > using clearer words. > > Anyway, it's great to see native English speakers help reviewing this > series. > > The first two patches are v3 of rewriting "Writing Your First Test" > section of "Getting Started" patch [1], which was submitted about a > month ago. The rest are actual documentation rewriting. > > Note that this series only rewrites intro, test writing and running docs. > > [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/20220929132549.56452-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com/ > ping