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[pushed] wwwdocs: gcc-12: Simplify a sentence in the OpenMP section

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Gerald Pfeifer Feb. 18, 2023, 10:32 p.m. UTC 
  That was a bit too much in terms of additions things. :-)

Pushed.

Gerald
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NightStrike Feb. 18, 2023, 10:36 p.m. UTC | #1 
On Sat, Feb 18, 2023, 17:32 Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com> wrote:

> That was a bit too much in terms of additions things. :-)
>
> Pushed.
>
> Gerald
> ---
>  htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> index 32403579..fd4062e6 100644
> --- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> +++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
>    <ul>
>      <li>OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The <code>close</code> map
>        modifier and the <code>affinity</code> clause are now supported.
> -      In addition Fortran gained additionally the following features
> which were
> +      In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
>

Missing a comma after "in addition" and "features". For the latter, "x that
y" > no comma. "X, which y" > comma. For the former, it's required to
separate the prepositional phrase from the subject.

>
Gerald Pfeifer Feb. 19, 2023, 12:12 a.m. UTC | #2 
On Sat, 18 Feb 2023, NightStrike wrote:
> Missing a comma after "in addition" and "features". For the latter, "x that
> y" > no comma. "X, which y" > comma. For the former, it's required to
> separate the prepositional phrase from the subject.

Thanks, and good point. I'll take care of all "In addition"s throughout 
all of wwwdocs.

Gerald
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diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
index 32403579..fd4062e6 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@  You may also want to check out our
   <ul>
     <li>OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The <code>close</code> map
       modifier and the <code>affinity</code> clause are now supported.
-      In addition Fortran gained additionally the following features which were
+      In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
       available in C and C++ before: <code>declare variant</code> is now
       available, <code>depobj</code>, <code>mutexinoutset</code> and
       <code>iterator</code> can now also be used with the <code>depend</code>